Post by Darcest_Light on Oct 23, 2014 12:42:42 GMT -5
"This is Chapter Three of a Fictional series I'm writing so people who find this story interesting you should probably read my first two chapters to catch up, I'm hoping to go to a 10 or 15 chapters if its allowed by The Katarite? So Anyway here you guys go"
Rain-(Who are these guys!? And why are they after Alita?)
Rain-Sorry I don't know what your talking about?
Unknown 1-Don't play dumb kid we know she's here, this could also be a serious crime on you as well.
Rain-(who are these two? Their wearing armor plating they can definitely not be the police!) Can I see some ID first?
Unknown 2-Kid we don't have time for this hand over the girl at once!!
Rain-I'm sorry but first show me your Identification please.
Unknown 1-Out of our way!!!
Akonia's Kitchen
Alita-Rain!!! The food's getting cold what are you?!...
Rain-Ugh!!... I knew... It Alita!! Run!!
Unknown 1-There she is go get her!
Alita-Rain,,,
Rain-Alita... Go!!
Unknown 1-keep quiet!!!
Rain-(As I flew through the air aimed for a wall all I saw was Alita and she was screaming my name as hard as she can)
Alita-Rain!!! Gotcha!!
Rain-Alita?!...
Unknown 2-It seems the rumours are right she-s incredibly powerful just as mentioned.
Alita-Who are you people?
Rain-Ugh!... Alita?...
Unknown 2-Come with us Bio-Weapon! Alita-I won't!
Unknown 2-If you don't come that kid will be killed by us its best you comply now.
Rain-Alita!?...
Alita-Okay I'll come with you (Sorry My Friend Rain)
30 Minutes later
Rain-Aargh!! What... Oh yeah (I was knocked out by those two creeps) Alita!!! Where!? She's gone they've taken her those bastards!
25 Minutes Earlier
Unknown 1-You promise to come quietly if we leave him alone fine by that.
Unknown 2-We're not done yet she still has to be taken back to HQ our mission is to drop her of at The Mountain Area come on!
Alita-Okay I'm coming.
Rain-so they took her to the mountain range thanks dad's new security cameras! Don't worry I'm coming! Alita!!! (Why take Alita is she really that Dangerous?!)
Rain-(Who are these guys!? And why are they after Alita?)
Rain-Sorry I don't know what your talking about?
Unknown 1-Don't play dumb kid we know she's here, this could also be a serious crime on you as well.
Rain-(who are these two? Their wearing armor plating they can definitely not be the police!) Can I see some ID first?
Unknown 2-Kid we don't have time for this hand over the girl at once!!
Rain-I'm sorry but first show me your Identification please.
Unknown 1-Out of our way!!!
Akonia's Kitchen
Alita-Rain!!! The food's getting cold what are you?!...
Rain-Ugh!!... I knew... It Alita!! Run!!
Unknown 1-There she is go get her!
Alita-Rain,,,
Rain-Alita... Go!!
Unknown 1-keep quiet!!!
Rain-(As I flew through the air aimed for a wall all I saw was Alita and she was screaming my name as hard as she can)
Alita-Rain!!! Gotcha!!
Rain-Alita?!...
Unknown 2-It seems the rumours are right she-s incredibly powerful just as mentioned.
Alita-Who are you people?
Rain-Ugh!... Alita?...
Unknown 2-Come with us Bio-Weapon! Alita-I won't!
Unknown 2-If you don't come that kid will be killed by us its best you comply now.
Rain-Alita!?...
Alita-Okay I'll come with you (Sorry My Friend Rain)
30 Minutes later
Rain-Aargh!! What... Oh yeah (I was knocked out by those two creeps) Alita!!! Where!? She's gone they've taken her those bastards!
25 Minutes Earlier
Unknown 1-You promise to come quietly if we leave him alone fine by that.
Unknown 2-We're not done yet she still has to be taken back to HQ our mission is to drop her of at The Mountain Area come on!
Alita-Okay I'm coming.
Rain-so they took her to the mountain range thanks dad's new security cameras! Don't worry I'm coming! Alita!!! (Why take Alita is she really that Dangerous?!)