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Post by The Katarite on Oct 7, 2014 11:54:09 GMT -5
I want to try an activity here called Finish The Story! I wrote the beginning to a short story here and you guys can end it the way you want to! Cannot wait to see what you guys come up with.
He walked through the dark valley in his gleaming silver armour, unafraid of what he may encounter. Armed with Lux, the Sword of Eternal Light, no creature that this darkness can spawn could challenge his might. The villagers and King of his Kingdom declared him worthy of being their hero and sent him on a quest alone to slay Zickrow. For years this detestable shapeshifter had been terrorizing the Kingdom through kidnapping, murder and destruction.
This selected hero who took the name Angel, sat camping, his only source of light being his small campfire. He was reflecting on his past, family and military experience, when he heard what sounded like a branch snapping. Angel observed his dimly lit surroundings and saw no trees. It was most likely bones snapping under the weight of some malicious creature. Angel stood, clasping his hand around the hilt of Lux. Within a few minutes, luminous amber eyes peered from the thick darkness at Angel. As the creature moved forward, the light of the campfire revealed it to be a Lycan.
Angel relaxed slightly for he had slain many Lycans in his time. But...Lycans are always a certain average height. This Lycan had to at least be 10 feet tall and was considerably more husky than other Lycans Angel had slain. Angel unsheathed Lux and prepared himself, his eyes filled with bravery and sheer determination. The Lycan, however, merely stood there and seemingly watched Angel as if to be studying him. Regular Lycans were also not the strategic type. Another odd character of this Lycan.
This continued for roughly another few minutes, and Angel refused to let his guard down. Suddenly, to Angel's horror, the Lycan's shape ascended and became surrounded by circling wisps of black magic. When the wisps dispersed, a dragon with three heads was revealed. Angel braced himself for an attack and began strategic planning...
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Post by Darcest_Light on Oct 15, 2014 14:32:06 GMT -5
He remebered his promise to Evangeline to return home to the Promised Land but would it become real due to this terror in his way Zickrow, he's target stared at him with 6 Eyes glowing fully red he could feel the darkness stripping what bravery he had.
Angel couldn't stand from how heavy the atmosphere turned in the sky. Is this the end of his quest? It could end two ways Living or Dying and it would all depend on how Angel knew of how the Zickrow fought.
Three minutes into the fight Angel was exasperated fully tired from how he had to parry every hit and he was studying Zickrow's fighting style but it didn't matter, one of the many things of being a Zickrow he could copy all beings style of fight.
Angel was at a huge disadvantage his right arm was impaled by one of the Zickrow's spikes on its tail which it swung to attack. Angel couldn't even stand anymore of the tiredness he was feeling but just as Zickrow threw the last hit a scream from out of nowhere "No!!" It seemed to be a little girl in a beige dress with slippers on and blonde hair she came running out and was standing in the middle of the too Monstrosities just they were ready to deliver the finishing blows.
Immediately the Zickrow stopped stunned and reverted into a woman's shape with green hair blue eyes and a sort of armor plating like none of the other kingdoms Angel had visited before. Angel was dumbfounded until he realized many people surrounding them watching with fear Angel questioned himself "What's Going On Here!?" The Zickrow now known as Kallia told him about how a terrible evil was coming and she was gathering humans to keep save from the impending Death that will soon come.
Angel stunned asked Kallia What Evil!? Why Do This!? The Kingdom Said You Were Responsible For Many Deaths So Why!?
As all great stories have a cliffhanger The Katarite someone else can finish it of or if you want I can end it
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Post by The Katarite on Oct 15, 2014 14:44:15 GMT -5
You was meant to end it, my friend. I wanted to see everyone's ending to my beginning.
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Post by Darcest_Light on Oct 15, 2014 14:47:15 GMT -5
Should I end it cause anyone else could end it better I'm not good at that such stuff
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Post by The Katarite on Oct 15, 2014 16:27:40 GMT -5
You don't understand. I want everyone to provide their own version of how it ends. So, whatever you come up with, write it down, bro.
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Post by Darcest_Light on Oct 15, 2014 16:50:53 GMT -5
Okay hey The katarite I decided to finish it.
As Angel stood their questioning himself and he's sense of justice that he was ordered to kill something that was protecting human life as he did so much and valiantly. Kallia called all the people out of the shadows they were carrying clothes and some food it seems they were going to a cave Kallia had seek out when the End would begin for them all to stay in.
She was sitting on a wood log the people around them tending to the Children's cries for food and water, some people went out with torches to look for food and it looked like Kallia was the one in charge of the group's needs. And they trusted her choices on how to deal with stuff.
When all the people were searching for food. Kallia told me thet story about how she found out about the impending doom it seemed as if every Supernatural being on the earth knew something was happening actually the signs were clear but people never took noticed so we could be he'll responsible for our own destruction.
Kallia told him the name of the Village that all this started where all the Negative energy was resonating from Angel could not believe the next words coming from Kallia's mouth "Eidelmont" it was the village Angel grew in and left Evangeline in luckily it wasn't far from his current place and Angel could reach it in a day's walk.
Angel left Kallia and ran towards his village hoping to make it before sunset to see if he's family and friends were still alive and of all Evangeline he's dearly beloved.
15 hours later without stop and rest he made it towards the town it was up in fires and houses layed broken on the ground Angel could only stare with shock in his face as a Demon like creature was ripping everyone to pieces infront of he's eyes but it couldn't prepare him for what he saw next, seemed as if Evangeline was the one who was controlling the Demon and ordering it to kill people.
Angel tried to ask but was interrupted by Evangeline saying "Why am I doing this?" She said this was her mission she wanted to kill everyone and purify the world and recreate it in her own image. Looks like Evangeline was a demon overlord who lived in Angel's town and she was the reason the world was going to the end. Angel decided to fight against Evangeline alone.
Weirdly enough she agreed and banished the other demon and her hands turned to blades eyes red and got armor-like skin, Ready to fight she stood there and still mocked Angel about his naivety of there relationship. Angel drew his sword and was ready to fight even though he loved this Demon who stood before him Evangeline came in with a turn kick and gripped sand threw it in his face but Angel trained everyday and was ready for anything a demon could throw at him.
When the sun came up Angel's impaled arm acted up in pain he's face all bloody and blood rolling down he's gripping sword hand he was exasperated but to the point where he could no longer stand, Evangeline was also badly wounded with left leg sliced right arm also sliced Evangeline was getting agitated that a human was on par with her. As the sunlight drew close the final hit was on the verge Evangeline said "this is the End Dave you're gonna die here!" And at that moment the the last strike was sliced after all Angel survived with a huge hole in his Heart Family and Friends destroyed by his loved one. Hestared to the sunrise and collapsed near the brink of death after that he woke to find him in a bed of a person resembling Evangeline he stood up grabbed the person and asked "Are you Evangeline?" The person siad yes and it seemed like the demon took her form to play games around.
There The Katarite I ended it sorry if it was a bad Ending.
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Post by The Katarite on Oct 15, 2014 17:56:56 GMT -5
There we go. Nice. That's your ending. Someone else may end it completely differently and that's what I wish to see.
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